User:Ecday2/Gorgas–Manly Historic District/TheRealJackyT Peer Review

Evaluate the drafted changes
Currently, I'm evaluating the article as it is (12:01pm, 11/30) with the knowledge that more additions are coming.

Lead

Specific information that doesn't feel overwhelming. Overall, a good lead that gives a brief overview and important information. Not too much else to say! As you add your revisions, it may be good to add a brief section at the end of the lead focusing on the issues with the area.

Content

Gives good overview of each of the buildings and how they relate to the area as a whole. We talked a bit in class about whether to add the information about enslaved labor into each section or to make a distinct section, and I would say it's better to make a whole new section entirely. Especially because it's a historically based article, you may be stepping on other historian's toes if you start editing within the paragraphs.

Tone and Balance

No issues with tone or balance. Everything is portrayed in an objective manner. Be careful and specific as you add your revisions, though!

Sources and References

Well supported article that is most likely being watched by individuals who research well, so make sure to support all your statements with a reference.

Images and Media

For your case, I'm not too sure that you should add anything else. I think the pictures of the buildings are the most important things, and finding/adding a picture seems like more trouble than it's worth for a page that already has so many.

Organization

I think the best place to add your section about enslaved labor is most likely as it's own heading towards the bottom, in a complete section. Right now there are only two main sections, so adding a third at the bottom would both emphasize the importance of that facet of the district's history without seeming out of place or crammed in before other information.

Final Thoughts

You've got a great article to work with, and I think your additions will fit in nicely if done correctly. It's a very well structured article, so make sure you're staying consistent with the structure of your information and references. Good luck! I think it will work out well.

General info
Ecday2
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Gorgas–Manly Historic District
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gorgas–Manly Historic District