User:Echinacea10/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Poverty in Indonesia


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article contains an interesting theme and has not been widely covered by other articles on Wikipedia, but has not provided further explanation about poverty in Indonesia. It also only gives a short introduction and some figures that were poorly cited as some of the website can not be open. The data provided is also still lacking so it needs to be improved. The article has also been rated as high importance and rated as stub-class on the WikiPedia's project important and quality scale.


 * Sources
 * https://www.worldbank.org/en/country/indonesia/overview
 * https://www.oxfam.org/en/inequality-indonesia-millions-kept-poverty
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/00074911003642252
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s11205-015-1044-0
 * https://openknowledge.worldbank.org/bitstream/handle/10986/21362/wps2435.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y
 * https://openknowledge.worldbank.org/bitstream/handle/10986/21356/wps2438.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y
 * https://search.informit.org/doi/epdf/10.3316/informit.058253335957288
 * https://en.unesco.org/inclusivepolicylab/analytics/indonesia-covid-19-pandemic-hurts-poor-women-most
 * http://www.smeru.or.id/sites/default/files/publication/econgrow2.pdf

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Feminism in Indonesia


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has already written about the history of Indonesian Feminism since Dutch and Japanese colonization until 21st Century. It also mentioning some issues regarding gender such as gender violence and child marriages. However it has not cover much information regarding the law and policy about women in Indonesia, for example CEDAW and the law on the elimination of domestic violence and how was the political process to have those policies that focused on women's rights. This article has been rated as start class on WikiProject Feminism, WikiProject Women, WikiProject Indonesia and It also been rated as mid importance.


 * Sources
 * http://library.fes.de/pdf-files/bueros/indonesien/13830.pdf
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/09502386.2020.1844262
 * https://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2020/03/08/feminism-is-not-for-indonesia-conservative-muslims-recipe-for-womens-empowerment.html
 * https://www.chathamhouse.org/2019/05/how-women-are-transforming-indonesia
 * https://www.lowyinstitute.org/the-interpreter/long-struggle-women-s-movement-indonesian-politics
 * https://investinginwomen.asia/knowledge/university-sydney-july-2017-womens-rights-workers-cedaw-indonesia/
 * https://asiapacific.unwomen.org/en/focus-areas/cedaw-human-rights/indonesia

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Health in Indonesia


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article does covers general health issues in Indonesia, such as quality and lifestyle, diseases, vaccination and also maternal and child health care. Nevertheless, the coverage of women's health in Indonesia has not been covered much and I think it could be enhanced by mentioning more about the law and condition year by year. This article has been rated as start class on WikiProject Indonesia and WikiProject Health and Fitness. The article has been rated as top importance on WikiProject Indonesia, however it has not been rated yet by WikiProject Health and Fitness.


 * Sources
 * http://sr.sgpp.ac.id/post/womens-health-care-a-flaw-in-indonesias-system
 * https://www.statista.com/statistics/1171111/indonesia-women-s-healthcare-services-in-integrated-health-service-post/
 * https://www.thenewhumanitarian.org/report/89150/indonesia-gender-inequality-endangers-women%E2%80%99s-health
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=dRrQ2HDxTHgC&oi=fnd&pg=PP1&dq=women+health+in+indonesia&ots=tZDUoyzu5R&sig=ojSWYQQKc8x6jXVRbQHvoQ00PxM#v=onepage&q=women%20health%20in%20indonesia&f=false
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/1471-2393-10-43
 * https://iwhc.org/tag/indonesia/
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/s12913-017-2028-3

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Women in Indonesia


 * Article Evaluation
 * Women in Indonesia article has already explained general background about women in Indonesia such as the history, women's rights, health and welfare, as well as employment. Nonetheless, this article has not put enough information about current data and condition of women in Indonesia and also how the country had produced many policies to protect women's right but the situation does not seem to change significantly The article ha been rated as C-Class on WikiProject Gender Studies, WikiProject Women's History, WikiProject Indonesia, WikiProject Feminism. This is also has been rated as mid-importance on WikiProject Gender Studies and WikiProject Indonesia.


 * Sources
 * https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/1868103421989720
 * https://www.cambridge.org/core/journals/trans-trans-regional-and-national-studies-of-southeast-asia/article/rising-public-piety-and-the-status-of-women-in-indonesia-two-decades-after-reformasi/7676157EA18DB194320C44C49219ECC1
 * https://asiapacific.unwomen.org/en/countries/indonesia
 * https://en.unesco.org/inclusivepolicylab/analytics/indonesia-covid-19-pandemic-hurts-poor-women-most
 * https://pursuit.unimelb.edu.au/articles/how-women-are-changing-indonesia
 * https://asia.fes.de/news/examining-womens-roles-in-the-future-of-work-in-indonesia
 * https://www.lowyinstitute.org/the-interpreter/long-struggle-women-s-movement-indonesian-politics

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Provinces of Indonesia


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has been rated as start class and mid importance on WikiProject Indonesia
 * Sources
 * https://www.kompas.com/skola/read/2020/01/04/200000969/daftar-provinsi-di-indonesia-dan-ibu-kotanya
 * https://www.embassyofindonesia.org/provinces/
 * https://www.nationsonline.org/oneworld/map/indonesia_admin_map.htm
 * https://www.nationsonline.org/oneworld/map/indonesia_admin_map.htm