User:Eclipsed Moonlight/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Guardians of Ga'Hoole

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because it was listed as a C tier article on a book series I used to love as a child. So I decided to see how it was represented on Wikipedia. My first impression is that there an overall good telling of the story despite some sections being missing.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Overall, considering the leading questions above, the lead is decently written. It overall gives a short concise description of what the article is about. Granted it does include some information about order of the books which is released later. However the lead does not reference any of the other sections at all. Moving on to the content, the content is mostly consistent. It is written to give an overall synopsis of the plot between all of the books and does a great job of highlighting the overall story in each book. Some books however have very litte information written about them ie: The Burning, To Be A King, and Exile. The entire article is written in a completely neutral tone. It is trying to pick out only the most relevant parts of the story so that a reader can get a good understanding of what happens in each book. There are no points of view expressed in the article mainly just how the people have interpreted the story. The sources are there and most of the links work. That being said, the information on the links is very minimal and doesn't really provide much to the pages in my opinion. The organization made sense in that it just ran down the story lines and the spin off books. That being said, it definitely could use a bit of reorganize and structure. Maybe some distinctions between the orginal series, the spin off books, and what took place when in the timeline. There are no images or pictures of substance which is quite frustrating since there are a lot of characters described and not even the book covers were used anywhere to help separate each story. Looking into the Talk page, there is little conversation going on there and not much is being said about the status of the article. It is left as an interest for many Wikiprojects but it doesn't seem to be a part of any of them. Additionally, it is reated C tier and given mid to high importance depending on the project.

To improve this page, my suggestions would be a small note giving a timeline of the books in the series since this is an articles about the universe and plot lines of the books. I think each book should have some recognition that is larger than 1-3 sentences. Some images of the book covers would be helpful to make the page pop more and help organize the story section by separating each story. Additionally, a lot more sources need to be found if they exist.