User:Ed.osterberger/Communication studies/HaydenD1010 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Communication Studies


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ed.osterberger/Communication_studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead follows and includes all the guidelines. Maybe could use some more detail.

Content: The content us up to date and relates to the topic precisely. Good work.

Tone and Balance: Nothing was bias and everything seems to be fair and on point. again, good work Ed.

Organization: it was very organized and not scattered all over the place. I really like that about his draft because it allows for an easy read.

Overall Impressions: The content he added added a much clear understanding of communication skills within a business standpoint. I think the main strength is the organization and use of sources within the draft, it makes it seem very professional and trustworthy. One thing I can add is the use of more detail, and if Ed wanted maybe an image, I don't think there is a use for a image in this draft because there really isn't any image you can import about business communications but just an idea.