User:Eddie891/GA reviewing

Hi, and I intend to review this article shortly. My prose comments will probably be 1) a lot and 2) pretty subjective things, so feel free to discuss any/all, and ask for clarification when desired. I generally spot-check around 25% of sources, but if issues arise I will spot-check more. I generally assume good faith for offline sources and (though I can generally tell if something is comprehensive) will approach the review as though there are no major omissions. If you don't want me to review your article for whatever reason, let me know and I will G6 this page. I won't take it personally if you don't like my comments (I don't hold any illusions that I'm a perfect copy-editor (or even a particularly great one). Remember this is an exercise to make the page as good as it can be, not to complain, rant, or get into bitter disagreements, so treat my comments as suggestions, not ultimatums. Best wishes,