User:Eddiwong/Crucifixion (Titian)/Clairec10 Peer Review

General info
Eddiwong
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Eddiwong/Crucifixion (Titian)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Crucifixion (Titian)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The added information looks great- I'd only ask which sections they'd be going under. I also think it may be worth it to explore new sections and additional secondary sources regarding this if you're able to find any.
 * I'd also say add more of your own wording or even paraphrasing some of the quotes you added as the information is helpful but very quotation heavy- but you'll likely do that as you continue editing the article.
 * I think it would also be interesting to further discuss the impact and influence of it in modern day.