User:Editi2000/Restorative practices/373077CH Peer Review

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While reading this article the first paragraph of the article, I had the feeling that it was an easy reading that suited my reading style. The rest of the article will give you a clear understanding of how such a statement is especially true as you read it. One thing I would like to say is that there are some areas in the article that need some editing, and the reason for this is that everything seems to be bold. The other thing that I noticed about the book is that the author seemed to have tried to have a starting title like it was at the beginning of each paragraph. As I mentioned before, it was hard to notice since the text was all the same throughout the whole article. In addition to this, what I noticed as I worked my way through the article is the lack of references or links to the source of the information that the author has cited. I think overall the information the author provided sounded natural, and I mean by this that I can't find any opinions that the author might or could have provided that would have been different from what I saw in the article. They also did a very good job of breaking down whatever article they used and provided very detailed information on the subject, however, as I mentioned in my previous comment, the inclusion of links throughout the text will help the text to look a lot better as well as provide even more information. All in all, it was a very interesting and informative read, but I think it just needs a few weeks here and there to be polished to perfection because in the end, it will be a great read.


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