User:Editingenchilada/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1
WikiProject Psychology:WikiProject Skepticism This article is written like a personal reflection, personal essay, or argumentative essay that states a Wikipedia editor's personal feelings or presents an original argument about a topic. (September 2022)
 * Daydream
 * Article Evaluation: This article may contain an excessive amount of intricate detail that may interest only a particular audience. (September 2022)
 * Article Evaluation: This article may contain an excessive amount of intricate detail that may interest only a particular audience. (September 2022)


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Option 2
WikiProject Food and drink This article is written like a personal reflection, personal essay, or argumentative essay that states a Wikipedia editor's personal feelings or presents an original argument about a topic. (October 2010)
 * Heinz pickle pin
 * Article Evaluation:

I also noted that some of the language is very choppy and the header choices could be improved as well.
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Option 3
WikiProject Occupational Safety and Health This article's tone or style may not reflect the encyclopedic tone used on Wikipedia. (April 2012)
 * Fire prevention
 * Article Evaluation:

This article is written like a personal reflection, personal essay, or argumentative essay that states a Wikipedia editor's personal feelings or presents an original argument about a topic. (May 2020)

This article also seemingly has issues with headings and contains material that is not necessary to the topic.


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Option 4
WikiProject China WikiProject Food and drink
 * Malay sponge cake

This article is written like a personal reflection, personal essay, or argumentative essay that states a Wikipedia editor's personal feelings or presents an original argument about a topic. Please help improve it by rewriting it in an encyclopedic style. (August 2019)
 * Article Evaluation

Historical edits could be shortened.
 * Sources

Option 5

 * Water scarcity in the United States

The article's lead section may need to be rewritten. The reason given is: Details should be moved out of lede into suitable sections, summary of rest of article should be included. (June 2023) This article needs additional citations for verification. (May 2023) This article is written like a personal reflection, personal essay, or argumentative essay that states a Wikipedia editor's personal feelings or presents an original argument about a topic. (May 2023)
 * Article Evaluation


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