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Andy Schor - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I choose the Andy Schor article partly because it was in the lecture and if I do cover Andy Schor in my wiki group assignment I know where to start.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The Lead Section is a great start to the wiki page including in a concise summary of the overall political career of Andy Schor. Though this great for a summary of the wiki information their is no summary of policy efforts he has passed while in office.

For content as mentioned with not enough political accomplishments Mayor Andy does not show much detail on how he was mayor or in the board of commissioners for 10 years. The wiki Equity portion is nonexistent because there is only one section. Content does look up to date.

Views seem neutral though I do feel that the only accomplishment previous authors give to him is being the first Jewish Major of Lansing which is a little scary. Other than that most items is just basic information on the guy.

The image looks like it complies with Wiki copyright and is just a picture of Andy so checks out. Bonus points for him smiling in the picture.

The overall comments is just one on adding a source on the article and marking it true or false.

Overall status is an underdeveloped Wiki page but it has potential. Gives basic information of political offices that Andy has held over the years. With some references to support such information.