User:Edstr121/Aluminum cycle/Drumm065 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Edstr121


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Edstr121/Aluminum_cycle?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aluminum cycle

Evaluate the drafted changes
You guys have a great start here. Make sure to follow the wikipedia format with the Lead and article body sections. I know you're probably not finished but I would include more sections, some very common ones would be things like anthropogenic impacts, ecological consequences, etc.