User:Edupp1993/Inguinal hernia surgery/Cheetahbonnet Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Edupp1993, Safa1364


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Inguinal hernia surgery


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Inguinal hernia surgery

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead should include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. It should provide a brief discussion of the article's major topics. The lead should not include information that is not otherwise present in the article and should be short and concise. The lead section of the article is very detailed which is great but perhaps would better be suited as part of the body/content of the article, while the lead should be short and simply give a brief overview of what will be discussed in the rest of the article.

Content (robotic surgery)

The content added on robotic surgery is both neutral and relevant to the topic. The sources are up to date and were all published within the past 5 years.

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)