User:Edwardlalone/Archive 1

Utah Portal Gov't Section
Nice work on the government section. I rearranged the sections a bit, see the talk page. &mdash; Zaui (talk) 19:56, 22 May 2006 (UTC)

WikiProject U.S. Supreme Court cases
Edwardlalone, I have recently begun reviving the Supreme Court case project since the founder is inactive. You're welcome to drop on by and help us out if you are still interested. There's also a discussion going at the project's talk page. Enjoy your Memorial Day! --Kchase02 (T) 06:10, 29 May 2006 (UTC)

Wikipedia Neutrality Project
Greetings. You've shown support for the Wikipedia Neutrality Project, which unfortunately became inactive since the original creator left. I've decided to take it up and currently am actually remaking it, proposing with serious changes in methods (but not the purpose). The proposals are discussed on Wikipedia talk:Neutrality Project, and I'd appreciate any input, and look forward to your participation. CP/M 00:42, 14 July 2006 (UTC)

Wow! Thanks for the Procedures of the House update
Edward, thanks for the great ad to the procedures of the House article. I didn't expect something so detailed so quickly. That is the first substantive add I have seen to a Wikiproject Congress COTW in a long time. Regards, --Daysleeper47 13:03, 18 October 2006 (UTC)

Government of Utah
Ed, Just a FYI - I moved the Government section you wrote for the Utah portal and made a new article out of it, Government of Utah, and then removed it from the portal. I thought the information worked better in an article instead of being part of a portal. &mdash; Zaui (talk) 18:51, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

United States House Homeland Security Subcommittee on Investigations
Thanks for catching my cut-and-paste flub on United States House Homeland Security Subcommittee on Investigations! —Markles 02:19, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

Bernardine Dohrn - NPOV
I am a new volunteer to the NPOV Project. I just cleaned up the Bernardine Dohrn, which listed on the NPOV list. Since this is one of my first projects I randomly selected you to ask for a review of my work.

My concerns are listed ont he discussion page of that article, but in summary, I found about half of the text mainly a subjective history of the organization to which she belonged, and from which she "earned" her notabiltiy, The Weathermen of the late 1960s. I removed most of this and linked to the Weathermen article.

Thanks.

--Kevin Murray 20:12, 24 December 2006 (UTC)

Bernardine Dohrn
I'll take a look at the Bernardine Dohrn article which I worked on last week to try to take out some NPOV issues and cleanup. Perhaps there is not much well sourced documentation on the other aspects of her life. All I did was try to work with the info. which was already there.

Talk to you soon.

Kevin

Bernardine Dohrn
Edward,

I am involved with this article only to the extent of editiing to make sure that it conforms to Wikipedia policies for structure and a neutral point of view. Unfortunately I don't have the time to do offline research. If you want to provide research, I can help to incorporate your work into the article. Such are the limitations of volunteerism.

Kevin

--Kevin Murray 23:10, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

I just read your rewrite; it looks great. There is a bit of NPOV issue adn there should be some references, but overall I'm fine with the article. If no one posts a complaint it will probabably be just fine.

--Kevin Murray 23:16, 4 January 2007 (UTC)