User:EdwinHartlove/Georg Olden (graphic designer)/AnnieZhou11 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: EdwinHartlove


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 * User:EdwinHartlove/Georg Olden (graphic designer)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Georg Olden (graphic designer)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start! I like that you began with early life.

Good job on linking to other articles!

"before dropping out shortly after the attack on Pearl Harbor to work as a graphic designer for the Office of Strategic Services (OSS), forerunner of the CIA." Expand on this!

Focus on describing his work! Who were his influences? What was his art style?