User:Edwwards/History of Western Australia/Chattrrboxx Peer Review

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Edwwards
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 * History of Western Australia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Cockburn Ranges

Well done with clearly describing the Ranges with visual detail and use of occupation.

Djadiling

Good inclusion of Last Glacial Maximum that introduces the topic for later paragraphs.

Brockman

The Juukan-1 site compared to Juukan-2 site weights more in text. Possibly include more evidence from juukan-2 site.

West Angelas

What method was used on the grindstone that found reside?

Review

Overall, wonderful archeological addition to this article. I can clearly understand the vocabulary and the formatting is informative and clear.