User:Edwwards/History of Western Australia/Sbisho Peer Review

General info
Edwwards
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Edwwards/History of Western Australia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):History of Western Australia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(I did this on the talk page a couple days ago sorry I just realized I should do this on here)

This article is incredibly relevant and adds crucial detail to the wikipedia article. Danya adds more sites to the wiki, as well as including details on dating and possible lifestyles and economies of those who lived within the sites.

The article is incredibly neutral. There is no inflammatory language.

The additions are purely from an archaeological perspective, focusing on Ancient Western Australia. The additions represent the sites found within Western Australia and the artifacts and remains found within these sites.

Links are functional and are represented fairly within Danya’s article.

The texts cited are all published by Australian Archaeology, a reputable journal that has been publishing since the 70’s. I would like to see more sources from different journals, but these sources are sufficient. Information is relatively recent.

Edits

"Located in the traditional lands of the Martidja Banyjima people in the Pilbara region, the first occupation of the Djadjiling Rockshelter IS DATED TO 35,000 BP."

“A grindstone excavated from a rockshelter in the West Angelas region of Pilbara contains residues of a plant THAT strongly suggestS that they derive from the plant nardoo.”

“The evidence of occupation in the Midwest region aligns with evidence from surrounding regions, and affirms the traditional knowledge of the Wajarri Traditional Owners: that they have occupied this region since time immemorial” Sbisho (talk) 07:24, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[ reply]


 * I didn't want to edit your stuff without putting here, in case you like your sentence structure better than my edits. Thanks for letting me read this article! Sbisho (talk) 07:26, 18 May 2024