User:Eelasher/Climate change in mexico/Anmramir Peer Review

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Brmbuck, Eelasher, Jkwasser

Climate change in Mexico

Lead
I feel like the overview/introduction was a little brief. The introduction also touches on the impacts such as water, health and air pollution but is not addressed in the rest of the article. So that could be one way to expand your article for the next Wiki entry.

Content
I think the content provided is extremely relevant to the topic. There are many subheads and headers that go into detail about the topic. I really enjoyed the Ecological Responses header and information, but the sub-headers seemed very detailed. For climate projections I think there could be some expansion, and possibly adding more headings for public health and safety and environmental health impacts.

Tone and Balance
The tone and balance of the article was neutral and well written. There was not much confusion with academic jargon and was pretty easy to read.

Sources and References
The sources and references for this article seem to be reliable, credible sources. The use of case studies could be beneficial when expanding the article.

Organization
I think that the content is well written, but could use a bit more conciseness. Other than that I think the information and article is organized, and only a few points are underrepresented, but will develop with the second entry.

Images and Media
The images and article media was used in an appealing way with relevant captions. Adding a few more would strengthen the article too!

Overall impressions
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this article. For the second entry I would work on adding more about the public and environmental impacts of climate change too, and possibly more mitigation and adaptation strategies. This article was well written and had interesting, relevant headers and subheader.