User:Eepygirl/Cameleon (protein)/Sadiamoon08 Peer Review

General info
Eepygirl
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cameleon (protein)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cameleon (protein)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article discussed the engineered protein called Cameleon, which is utilized to visualize calcium levels in living cells. The lead has been updated to include relevant and neutral content regarding the article topic. The student added information on the application of chameleon in neuroscience and fields of biology by adding an example which highlighted a specific function in understanding mechanisms. There are no overrepresented or underrepresented viewpoints that I could identify. All source links work and support the claims mentioned in this article. The information is relatively old (about two decades old), however, there could have been mention of more current studies regarding the protein if attainable. Additionally, in the mechanisms section, there is an addition of a spectroscopy study conducted regarding the protein in question. It would be helpful if either a short explanation or an article was linked to make the reader understand what exactly a spectroscopy experiment would entail. The information is well formatted and concise within the article. It does not redirect the focus of the article but furthers its understanding of the topic. The sources are reliable and published notably. There are no added images, however, none is necessary to further understanding of mentioned information as of yet. Overall, this article is well written but could include more background information in the future.