User:Eesakguee/Methanococcus maripaludis/Karmartin Peer Review

Organization
So far, what has been added is really good information. I think the way that it is organized makes it clear to follow. I like that the group has changed the headings for the metabolism pathways to be sub-headings under the big heading of Metabolism. I understand that y'all have not gotten to the rest of the article so what is here so far gets an excellent.

Balance
Because your bacteria is non-pathogenic, y'all can't add on virulence and diseases, but y'all should look into any contributing factors it may have in diseases. For example, if it helps give nutrients to other pathogenic strains within a biofilm, or if it can amplify certain aspects of its environment.

Tone
Tone is professional and it flows well! good job.

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