User:Eestrad1019/Relationship churning/Jackie1236 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eestrad1019


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eestrad1019/Relationship_churning?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * creating a new Wikipedia page

Evaluate the drafted changes
 Lead : The lead of this article is informative and concise without including extraneous information or biased perspectives on the topic. It introduces why the topic is important and what the scope of the article will consist of.

 Content : The content of the article is relevant to the topic, and is organized in an easy to follow manner. The content all seems up to date and modern, and there doesn't seem to be any information that is irrelevant or too far removed from the scope of the article. The inclusion of "father involvement" was an interesting perspective on the topic of relationship churning and I felt that it improved the depth of the article.

 Tone and Balance : The drafted article does take a neutral tone. It deals heavily with data from academic articles and studies of interpersonal dynamics in families, and all of the data is presented in unbiased manners. The connections made between the data of fathers and motivations for relationship churning behaviors are detailed and balance the ideas in the article.

 Sources and References : All sources are up to date and valid, and there is a good balance of primary and secondary sources included to boost the reliability and validity of the information included.

 Organization : The drafted change is concise and easy to read and organized in a way that makes sense, no grammatical or spelling errors that I picked up on.

 Notability : The article follows Wikipedia guidelines for articles, and includes an appropriate amount of primary and secondary sources to offer the article credibility and information.

 Overall impressions : This article draft is detailed and thorough on the topic of relationship churning. It provides relevant and up-to-date information on the topic in an unbiased and informative way. The section on the link between relationship churning and father involvement is in-depth and detailed but it is also the primary section of the article. Possibly adding extra sources and more detailed explanations of importance for a couple of the other sections could help balance all of the information provided. Overall very good job! The article is informative and easy/enjoyable to read!