User:EeveeLynn

=Articles That Need Improvement=

1.Crème brûlée
 * 1) -weak lead description
 * 2) -"crema catalana" section should a under the "History" section
 * 3) -Order of contents seems disorganized: would make more sense for it to be history, crema catalana (if not included in history section), ingredients, technique
 * 4) -The technique section could use for some expansion on how the dish is made (for example, the making of the custard)
 * 5) -Image of "creme brulee flambee" seems out of place as it could give people the wrong impression of the dish, as creme brulee is rarely served on fire
 * 6) -potential content misconception: the topping is caramelized sugar, not caramel: and there is a stark difference between the two
 * 7) -most edits in the history tab are just small copyedits such as grammar or spelling fixes

2.Coffee Cake
 * 1) -tag says it needs additional citations for verification
 * 2) -lead description is too long and includes specific information that may better fit in subsections
 * 3) -pictures should go with specific subsets not at the end of the article
 * 4) -lacking information and elaboration under the specific types of coffee cake
 * 5) -the recent edits only seem to deal with minor spelling corrections and one person who swapped out the images
 * 6) -lacks flow, the tone shifts from sentence to sentence, sort of like a patchwork quilt of a wiki page


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Articles

 * American Saddlebred
 * Coffee Cake
 * Crème brûlée
 * Paul Anka
 * Juice

Begin Working,Problems and Tasks
1. Act
 * Lead section needs to be more concise
 * "structure" section could be added
 * the sections and sub-sections need to be re organized; lead, history, structures, number of acts, other media
 * should not be so focused around "3-act plays"

2.Social theory
 * lead section should be shorter and more concise
 * tone needs to be corrected from that of a opinion essay
 * biased statements should be removed/ reworded when possible
 * needs a more reader-friendly tone, less like an academic textbook
 * "social theories" in lead should be "social theory" in the first sentence of lead