User:Efish20/Fourth-wave feminism/NatDriesbach Peer Review

My peer is doing a great job bringing more information to the Criticism part of their article. They bring up a great point about how feminism affects marginalized women especially in other countries. I like how they bring up the effect capitalism has on making feminism marketable and that it isn't helping marginalized women and instead making it harder for those women to have representation and support. One of my suggestions is to check for grammar and spelling errors and to make sure the sentences blend smoothly.

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