User:Efmack95/Housing Act of 1949/Csparks01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Efmack95, since the Housing Act of 1949 is similar to a section in the Civil Rights Act of 1968


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User
 * Efmack95/Housing_Act_of_1949 preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Housing Act of 1949

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was no sandbox draft started, at least for what I could see. I was honestly slightly disappointed, since the main reason why I chose to review your article was because my Act has a provision on Fair Housing and I wanted to see the comparisons between the two.

Some places I would suggest editing would be; Introduction (need more legislative background) and an expansion on the provisions (tell me what each one contains, what it does, e.t.c.). I hope you are able to keep up with the workload, because I am looking forward to your edits.