User:Efs20/Effects of violence in mass media/Bec1970 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Efs20, SCL21A
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Efs20/Effects_of_violence_in_mass_media?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template :Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Effects of violence in mass media:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

As of 1:30 pm on 10/14 I do not see anything on the sandbox for Effects of Violence in Mass Media. '''There is no lead, article body, or references. Therefore, it is a no for all questions.'''