User:Egalla9/Extreme Weather Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD)/Ccstacey3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

egalla9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Egalla9/Extreme_Weather_Post-Traumatic_Stress_Disorder_%28PTSD%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Egalla9/Extreme_Weather_Post-Traumatic_Stress_Disorder_%28PTSD%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I thought that this topic was really interesting, and it's something that I had no previous knowledge about

- I think in terms of organization it might be good to have more headings to divide up all of the content and so that way the article also follows a more clear outline

- other than the organization being a little bit confusing, I thought that the context was good and relevant, neutral, not out of date, and I thought that there were a lot of really good references

- overall I thought this article was relevant and very interesting!