User:Egalla9/Extreme Weather Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD)/Crwest11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Egalla9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Egalla9/Extreme Weather Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Egalla9/Extreme Weather Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Really good, concise lead that emphasizes the importance of the article. Shows exactly what content will be covered

- The way the article is broken up into different sections is really well done. They are well ordered and provide thorough information on every aspect of the topic

- Good job staying neutral + presenting facts/predictions

- The case studies at the end really emphasize the importance of the article

- Citations not all uniform

- It is written a few times that as climate change worsens, the risks of PTSD will rise, so to cut down on any repetition and expand on this you could create a section about the future of Extreme Weather PTSD with the changing climate

- Overall, really good!!