User:Egalla9/Extreme Weather Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD)/Jerseymike7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Barcelonaspring2023, Cmg23, Egalla9

Link to draft you're reviewing


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Egalla9/Extreme_Weather_Post-Traumatic_Stress_Disorder_%28PTSD%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall the draft was well written and followed a good outline. The content is well organized and broken down into mini sections that engages the reader. The sources also were cited correctly and cases mentioned throughout the article had legit first and secondary sources. One suggestion I would have for the group is that they should add images in an appealing way so that people who don't know what these extreme weathers look like can now see and understand.