User:Egk006/Mitchell's water monitor/Bap027 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Egk006


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Egk006/Mitchell%27s_water_monitor?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mitchell's water monitor

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead does not seem to have been updated, however since there was not much information provided within it, the article still related to the species mentioned in the lead just fine. At some point, providing some more information on the family it belongs to (Varanidae) may be beneficial for the reader. The content that was added most certainly seems relevant to the topic and neutral. Additionally, since the draft was organized so clearly it is much easier to see the grammatical changes that were made for the original article. Not only did this help to add additional important information, but it gave a much better flow for the reader while reading it. The draft does not include any pictures and the article only includes one, so adding more graphics (possibly such as a map of where they originate) is a thought. Other than some referenced sources being from wikipedia or no longer being found, such as source 10, the rest of the sources look good. Overall, I think that there is a very good start to the article changes. There could be a few more things added, however this is just the start so there is plenty of time to do so. After this and once more information is added underneath the well thought-out and organized headers, the article will be improved even more than it already has been.