User:Egonz102/Sustainable agriculture/EKingery Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Egonz102


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Egonz102/Sustainable_agriculture?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sustainable agriculture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job linking words of organizations that have other Wikipedia pages. This helps readers get more information about sub topics related to your article. For your bullet points. I feel like it may be good for you to switch up the symbol you use for each point. For example, if you use a bullet for your main heading "history", then use (-) for your next sub headings. In my opinion this would make the article's information a little more clear in distinguishing between headers vs information. I'm not sure what would be better but I feel like complete sentences would make the article sound better so if you can find a way to combine your points it may look and sound better. Make sure your punctuation is right as well. Also, make sure you are adding citations throughout your article or when needed to back up your statements. I like how you went into the history of the topic as well as the future of the topic. Overall good job just touch up some things.