User:Egraham1001/Alcohol and cancer/Wikichi2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Egraham1001, SFMA25, BeyondMed


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Alcohol and cancer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alcohol and cancer

Evaluate the drafted changes
The intro and epidemiology sections are very thorough with robust with up to date evidence supporting the data. Overall I see minimal grammatical errors and the sentence structure is sound. Areas for improvement include making the language more accessible to lay people with minimal scientific knowledge especially in the mechanisms section (to the extent that is possible). It would also be helpful for you to define ROS in the oxidative stress section, and ER in the hormone section. Additionally, In the other mechanisms sections there is a paragraph that is duplicated. Finally, the Epithelial-mesenchymal transition is short and may be able to be combined with another section.