User:Egstruck22/SEIU Local 1199NE/ThatOnePerson25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Egstruck22, Lahight22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Egstruck22/SEIU_Local_1199NE?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * SEIU Local 1199NE

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Organize the information into sections so it is easier to read. Right now it is like a wall of words and can be overwhelming to read

- Maybe add more direct links to other wikipedia pages.

- Maybe go into detail to explain what it means to be a communist, and to be purged and blacklisted. It would clear things up for readers who may not know what these things are.

- A lot of great information was added. Good job!