User:Eguest-clemson/Karen C. Johnson/Gbgaski Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Eguest-clemson
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Karen C. Johnson

Lead evaluation
The Lead gives a nice overview of the article's content beginning with an introductory sentence highlighting Johnson's main contribution. The Lead covers relevant information and references most of the articles major sections concisely without out being overly detailed.

Content evaluation
The content added provides relevant, up-to-date information, citing publications as recent as June 2019. All of the information appears complete, and there are no clear content gaps. This article is related to a historically underrepresented population -- women in STEM.

Tone and balance evaluation
The content is neutral with no apparent bias or attempt to persuade the audience. Because this article focuses almost solely on her accomplishments, it is possible that the article was written from a constructive perspective.

Sources and references evaluation
All of the information to be supported by reliable, unbiased sources. The sources are current with all of them being within the past 10 years, one as recent as June 2019. This article includes sources written by women who have been historically underrepresented in STEM. All of the links I checked were functioning.

Organization evaluation
Overall, the article is very well organized making it easy for the reader to follow. The information is clear and concise with no apparent grammatical mistakes.

Images and media evaluation
There are no images or media. A portrait of Johnson could add to the article, but it is not necessary.

Overall evaluation
Overall these modifications have improved the article's quality. More current sources have been added to elaborate on some of the article's content and syntax and grammar were improved for a better reading experience. These changes strengthen the article by updating information and improving its readability.