User:Egw11/Music of Mexico/NomenAuthor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Egw11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Music of Mexico


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Music of Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this is a good article, with well done contributions. Quality primary sources of both images and video links to how the forms of music in Mexico have existed within the Yucatán Peninsula. If there are to be critiques, the article does have a large number of images. While it is good to include them, the number may overcrowd the subtext and draw away from the descriptions which contribute the different headings