User:Eillima/Battle of Arbalo/N insinna12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Eillima


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eillima/Battle_of_Arbalo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Battle of Arbalo

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that your lead is good and explains what you are going to talk about. Your article itself is good but contains a few grammatic errors. It is neutral and does not contain any biases or opinions. I think you did a good job at giving a brief explanation of the battle. There are a few things I would add though like I would touch up a little more on the background of the battle and I would also talk a little more about Drusus and give a little more of a background on him. Another thing I would do is add some more citations to make sure that people know that the information you have is facts and not made up or incorrect. I think if you touch up these things that it will really help your article and make it even better than what it is now.