User:Eillima/Battle of Arbalo/Walti13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eillima


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eillima/Battle_of_Arbalo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Battle of Arbalo

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are some grammar mistakes. Some of the sentences are awkward to read and it would help if they were reworded. For example, the sentence starting with Drusus who is the step-son..." It seems that the last statement is missing a citation and it would be helpful if you had more citations after the sentences so one citation isn't covering a bunch of sentences.