User:Eisha Afzal/Effects of climate change/4theloveofAH Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * I am reviewing Eisha Afzal, Ablip, and Curioussoul25


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eisha Afzal/Effects of climate change


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Effects of climate change

Evaluate the drafted changes
As I’m reading your edits, your information is neutral and I would say I don’t see any claims that appear biased. I feel that you made really good edits because they do add to the article. For the question you had in regards to not knowing where to discuss urban development and population contributing to climate change, I think that it would fit best under the section called “Conflict” since you do discuss problems like pollution, spread of disease, and other things. I do like that you added more information where the sea level rise was discussed because your additions to that section helps me and other readers get a sense of why sea level will be detrimental to our cities. I also think your edits for the section human settlements as well because it does give us some numbers so the reader can see how drastically climate change affected people and their state of living.