User:Eisha Afzal/Effects of climate change/Ash the dragonfly Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Esha Afzal


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Effects of climate change

Evaluate the drafted changes
 Peer Review 

Lead


 * The lead provided a brief description of the article major issue
 * The lead contain a concise and clear introductory sentence which describe the article topic.
 * The lead does not include a clear description of the article's major sections.
 * The lead was nor overly detailed. It contained sufficient information.

Content


 * The content added was relevant to the topic.
 * The content added was to to date.
 * The effects of climate change is a vast topic which entails all aspects such as if a country is contributing to it on a high level the name of that country should be included and also countries that a contribute vastly to help climate change. For example, the Guiana shield rainforest.
 * This article deal with one of wiki equity gaps, it does not addresses topics to underrepresented countries.

Tone and Balance


 * The content was neutral.
 * View points are overrepresented on the large areas on Earth and not the small areas. The small countries do have large impacts on a large scale.

Sources and References


 * The content added was backed up but reliable sources
 * They reflect what the sources cited.
 * The sources are current.
 * The link worked.
 * The sources are backed by a diverse spectrum of authors.

Images and Media


 * Images needs to be updated because they represent data that was from early 2000s.


 * The images are captioned correctly.

Overall Impressions

Since it was a huge article, checking the history of the page showed that the contents are being updated, and the quality of the article is improving.