User:Eitamh/Windermere/Marissarp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eitamh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eitamh/Windermere?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Windermere

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job at staying neutral

I would try and look for more information like if the lake thermally stratifies and maybe subsection your writing into subheadings (like eutrophication or thermal stratification- and maybe also mention the impacts of pollution on the lake and how it affects the limnology of the lake itself) so it is easy for people to follow.

If you can find the limnological history of the lake (like how the lake has changed over time in response to human activity and pollution) that would also be good.