User:Eitamh/Windermere/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eitamh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eitamh/Windermere


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Windermere

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Hila, Lizzy here. Good start on the wikipage, you hit the requirements for the draft. My comments are relatively small, I think you are headed in the right direction. There are a few errors in the first paragraph, give that a proofread before you submit. The organization of the research section is good, remember that you want to add to the general reader's knowlege of the lake from these studies as well. I know with your first one it's a review paper so that can be hard to do, but don't be afraid to delve into the details. Finally, don't forget to make use of citing other wikipages, (using Ctr+k or the button at the top) for example, link to Phytoplankton when you talk about it. Let us know if you have questions!