User:Ej2022/Internment of Japanese Americans/EZEKEATHAN Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ej2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ej2022/Internment of Japanese Americans
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I understand that there is no lead section to your section of the article... could you provide some lead information(lead sentence... overall view of the paragraph) to give me a better idea of what your topic is about right at the start?

Your continent and tone seem good.

I am unsure as to the quality of your sources... I cant see them they copied weird.

The organization of this feels like a list. If that's what you want good, if you want something more better flowing consider linking some of the information together (Part of what I am suggesting is not really allowed on Wikipedia... a little interpretation).