User:Ejleonh680/Frank Bowling/Leilanireyes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(ejleonh680)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Frank Bowling
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The "Critical Assessment" needs a little more information. The section title may need to be defined by a different subject.