User:Ejohnson0118/Women of Trachis/Cpowers20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ejohnson0118


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ejohnson0118/Women_of_Trachis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women of Trachis

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what you have edited so far looks good. Instead of just starting all over you are adding material that is lacking from the previous article. While you add some new information to the previous it would be better to rewrite what's there. An example is, "After Hyllus sets off, a messenger arrives with word that Heracles, victorious in his recent battle, is making offerings on Cape Cenaeum and coming home soon to Trachis. The messenger also tells Deianira how Heracles is victorious in the battle he was engaged in, and that his delay home was due to everyone wanting to hear of his victories." Your edit here seems to be repeating the sentence before it, so you might want to combined them instead. It looks like you've been focusing on the beginning of the story. Unless you just haven't gotten there yet you should start focusing on the rest of the synopsis. You haven't cited much in your edit, like maybe the Achelous river. You might be waiting to finish to then start on the edits, but make sure not to forget them. What you have added so far does help this article with what the project is about. You probably haven't gotten to the Date part of the article, so there isn't much to discuss about there. A suggestion to add to the article is how modern or later telling's to this story have change. I think that would be interesting to see. Continue on the great work.