User:Ejohnson7/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Gymnastics at the 2020 Summer Olympics – Women's floor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have a good understanding with the sport of gymnastics because I participated in it for a couple of years when I was younger. I did watch the gymnastics portion of the 2020 Summer Olympics so the names are familiar to me and it's a sport I enjoy. I came upon this article while I was scrolling through the C-class articles list and decided to pick it because it didn't have any input on the talk page and was a fairly basic article.

Evaluate the article
This article was informational about the floor event from the 2020 Summer Olympics, but I have some suggestions to enhance the article:

- In the "Background" section of the article, it really highlighted gymnast Simone Biles and her struggles in this olympics. It almost seemed like it was explaining why she didn't win and felt unnecessary to include some of the details. Instead, take out the part where it says she was struggling with mental blocks and include information about Jade who did take first place and other gymnasts who returned from other countries.

- There could be more pictures in the article, maybe one of the gymnasts who medaled on the podium or a gymnast in her routine.

- In "Competition Format", there could be information on the scoring and how the gymnasts are scored and the average scores. Also, some information on what a reserve is could be mentioned because reserves are brought up later without much context on what it is.

- There isn't much a variety in the sources, with multiple information cited by two sources, and two news articles, so maybe find more of a variety from other sources. Maybe try some sources that aren't just based in America. ~