User:Ejpark0111/박혜린/Ohirsch2024 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ejpark0111


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ejpark0111/박혜린


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far the article looks good, though I can tell you have not finished it which is totally okay. It seems like you have a good thought process for the rest of it and have it planned out in sections, which is great.