User:Ekaman2020/Personal data/Tennisha Peer Review

General info
Ekaman2020
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * There was no draft in the sandbox for the user: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ekaman2020/Personal_data?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Personal data

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Ekaman2020 did a great job of adding to the section on NIST related data privacy. They added information about the special publications, provided citations and references and maintained a neutral stance. I did not find the document in the sandbox so I had to review the edit/ last revisions page. The content was well written and added value to the subject.