User:Ekaras05/Canthigaster rostrata/Meharris23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ekaras05, MEOsborne


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Canthigaster rostrata


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead- I think the opener is good but it might be too specific, I think it would be good to use less links/specific references in the opener and use them to expand the other sections of the article.

Tone and balance- It is very well written, I went through and changed a few sentences (super small edits, just like switching a word and stuff like that) and the tone seems very neutral. The only thing I would say is that there are a few cases where you have something like "easy meal" that sound a little bit casual so maybe read it through and try to edit those but even that isn't too big a deal.

Sources and references- I looked through your list of sources and opened a bunch and they all seem very reliable and it seems like you've presented a lot of really important information. You have a lot of links/references evenly dispersed throughout the article which I think is really good, like I said early I think the links are a little bit dense in the introduction since it's so specific but the references are all good quality.

Organization- The page is really well organized, I think all of the sections are very useful and informative. I think predation and defense could be combined into one section and the diet section could be expanded a little but besides that it looks good!

Images and media- I really really like that you included photos of the predators, I think that was such a good addition to the article. You have a lot of images which I think is really good. If you wanted to add even more I'd say you can include pictures of some of their prey just like you did for the predators!

Overall impressions- I think you have a really good article, I learned a lot and I love how many pictures there are (bonus points for your animal being really cute!!). Overall I think it's good and the only thing you might consider is expanding a few of the sections and adding pictures to the "diet" section, otherwise good job :)