User:Ekf22/Southerners on new ground/Mevanko Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Southerners on New Ground


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ekf22/Southerners_on_new_ground?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Southerners On New Ground

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Added lots of information throughout to expand on components already present in the article
 * Added a more substantial lead section to give an overview as to what the Southerners on New Ground are
 * History includes different perspectives of the goals -- not a bias viewpoint
 * Added more detailed descriptions and statistics to create a more legitimate description of SONG
 * More sections included to update SONG page to the modern times, up through 2022
 * Suggestion to add hyperlinks to other wiki articles throughout your edits
 * Define acronym of SONG in the lead section to make it clear before your first use of SONG