User:Ekidd04/Islamic mythology/Samantha.yahner282 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) I, Samantha am reviewing Ekidd04's work Islamic mythology.
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Islamic mythology.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I would like to give a clear statement within each given paragraph as I read to give a clear thought process for this assignment.

The leading paragraph is correct in neutral tone, accurate information, and is clear to understand and read.

The religion and mythology section can use some more information I can understand that it is giving more of a background/ explanation and origin of mythology but to keep it on topic this section can use more information relating to Islam, but it is off to a great start!

In the 'Biblical stories in the Quran' the opening sentence needs more draw and/or information; "The Quran includes many biblical narratives." It would be best to continue on with what stories and evaluate more into this paragraph.Other than that the citations are valid and correct.

Creation of the world has correct usage of citations and footnotes.

the rest of the section is very informative, clear, and accurate with citations and footnotes.