User:Elainewongso/Persuasive writing/Rickyc2002 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elainewongso


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Elainewongso/Persuasive_writing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Persuasive writing

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) The article has a lots of reliable references and hyperlinks.
 * 2) A sugguestion might be breaking down the article into more sections and add some headers such as "structure"
 * 3) adding more headers are recommended.
 * 4) I like the introductory paragraph you have added because it provides insight to the entire article, I will also add one to the wiki page I am editing.

- the article has a very good lead that provides a summary for the overall article

- the structures could be improved by adding some more sub sections but the over message is clear

- all informations added are relevant and has a good overall balance

- the informations provided are neutral with no identifiable bias

- sources used are reliable and peer reviewed resources