User:Elawson123/LGBT rights organization/Chmw8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elawson123, Jcrg34, Tge3hn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Creating User:Elawson123/LGBT rights organization/Bibliography - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBT rights organization - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The bibliography had viable sources; there was only 3 in there and 4 in the main article. More the reliable sources would strengthen the article.

In the articles the sections are scarce on information, every section could use more information to help fill out article.

There are content gaps in the " 21st century" and the "1950s: Organizations Begin" section.