User:Elawson123/LGBT rights organization/Dsgm3r Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elawson123, Jcrg34, Tge3hn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Elawson123/LGBT rights organization
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBT rights organization

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

'''First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?'''

The article does a good job of introducing what is LGBTQ+ organizations is and introduces some of the LGBTQ+ organizations.

'''What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?'''

I would add more information on the background of LGBTQ+ organizations, especially the organizations that were already mentioned like the scientific-humanitarian committee and the mattachine society.

What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

The most important thing that could be changed to this article is adding more information about the beginning LGBTQ+ organizations and where they started.

'''Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!'''

N/A